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Hello all, I just wanted to write a few sentences, and i want u to correct them for me.
-does anybody have a pen?
Because i have forgotten my pen.
-when i was at hospetal to visit my uncle, i forgot to bring some flowers.

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문장 1
- Hello all, I just wanted to write a few sentences, and i want u to correct them for me.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- -does anybody have a pen?
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- Because i have forgotten my pen.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- -when i was at hospetal to visit my uncle, i forgot to bring some flowers.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4