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Hi all ! is my first one ! i just want to improve my english, i think is more difficulte for me to write than talk, can you help me in my project ?
Thank a lot ! tou can contact me on my mail !

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- Hi all ! is my first one ! i just want to improve my english, i think is more difficulte for me to write than talk, can you help me in my project ?
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