Corecturi

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  • Remain in paid employment.

  • In Spain, the age of retirement has been of 65 until reciently, that have been increased up to 67 years.
  • This is a fact tat with the new medical discoveres and the improvement of the style of eat habits and a beeter way of life, the life expectancy has been increased in many years.
  • A modern country must find the way to combine the welfare state, and how the eldery people have the right of enjoying the rest of their life, rihts that they have gained, and the effect that the increase of life expectancy could prodece in the budget of the moderns countries.
  • In my opinion, the improvement of the quality of life should be applicated in a beeter way of life of the citizens, or, at least, this sould be the tend that the goverment should apply.

Vă rog, ajutaţi la corectarea fiecărei propoziţii! - English

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    • This is a fact tat with the new medical discoveres and the improvement of the style of eat habits and a beeter way of life, the life expectancy has been increased in many years.
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    • ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 2ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 2
  • propoziție 3
    • A modern country must find the way to combine the welfare state, and how the eldery people have the right of enjoying the rest of their life, rihts that they have gained, and the effect that the increase of life expectancy could prodece in the budget of the moderns countries.
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    • ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 3ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 3
  • propoziție 4
    • In my opinion, the improvement of the quality of life should be applicated in a beeter way of life of the citizens, or, at least, this sould be the tend that the goverment should apply.
      Votează acum!
    • ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 4ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 4