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i need a help
hello, i need a idea for life, i am a lost in the world for the future, maybe because I 'm young , so I think.
I want to be free...but the sistem.... the presion

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句子 1
- hello, i need a idea for life, i am a lost in the world for the future, maybe because I 'm young , so I think.
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- I want to be free...but the sistem.... the presion
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