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Please correct all my mistakes. THANK U!!!
Would you like to see wild animals without spending much money on trips!
If you would, zoo is a perfect solution for you.
You can go there at any time you like and see any animal you like too!
For people who like wild animals, zoo has become a real paradise!
But what are advantages and disadvantages of keeping animals in zoos?

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- Please correct all my mistakes. THANK U!!!
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- Would you like to see wild animals without spending much money on trips!
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
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- If you would, zoo is a perfect solution for you.
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- You can go there at any time you like and see any animal you like too!
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
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- For people who like wild animals, zoo has become a real paradise!
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- But what are advantages and disadvantages of keeping animals in zoos?
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