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Text from yananim - English

  • compare and contast pictures

  • I`d like to compare and contast two pictures.I think that theme which relates these photo is way of sport.In the first picture you can see a footboll team, who are plaing on the football field .The plaers seem to be happy.It is a summertime and plaers are wearing in spetial form.
  • In the second picture you can see one young girl. she is wearing warn clothes ,goggles and mittens.In the backgraund you can see a beautiful side with a mountins and forest.
  • These pictures have a lot in commen .Both pictures about sport.They shows young people , who is doing sport in spesiol outfit.
  • This people are practically of the same age.
  • The most obvious difference brtween these pictures is kind of sports which is football and skiing.
  • Moreover, in the first picture many people and in the second picture only one girl.
  • Finale in 1 photo are wearing summer form ,while the girl in 2 photo s wearing warm.
  • Frankly spiaking,these kinds of sport is not my cup of tea.I would never take up to this kind of sport.Becouse I prefer to do something indoors.

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    • I`d like to compare and contast two pictures.I think that theme which relates these photo is way of sport.In the first picture you can see a footboll team, who are plaing on the football field .The plaers seem to be happy.It is a summertime and plaers are wearing in spetial form.
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    • In the second picture you can see one young girl. she is wearing warn clothes ,goggles and mittens.In the backgraund you can see a beautiful side with a mountins and forest.
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    • Frankly spiaking,these kinds of sport is not my cup of tea.I would never take up to this kind of sport.Becouse I prefer to do something indoors.
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