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從mrkrolexa來的文本 - English

  • Music

  • Hi!
  • I am just starting to learn English.
  • My name is Alex.
  • I play guitar, piano and compose music.
  • I have rock band.
  • My band name is "ElliSmith" Thank you for attention!

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