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  • learning foreign languages

  • It is common knowledge that learning foreign takes a lot of time end money.Some people are convinced that it is useless and you only you only waste your time and money.
  • I would like to express my opinion on this problem.
  • In my point of view ,it is very useful thing to know some foreign languages.
  • First of all , it is very great ,when you arrive to ather country you can explane something what you need on theirs native language and understend them.Secondly, if you know at least one foreign language you have already more opportunities to get more prestigious and highly paid job.
  • On the contrary,there are people who belive that learning languages is waste the time and money.
  • There is a simple reason for this,they think that if at school they was learning one language about 10 years and have not a good resalts, it is all useless and for good learning foreign languages a peson should have a spetial opportunities.
  • Also people think that some publishers of textbooks and tutors simply cashing in on their money.
  • Personally,I strongly object to this statement .Firstly, you need not in the talent as well as you think,more important here to have any occupation discipline.Secondly,if you do not want to pay money for tuters and books you could try to learn it online for free.There are a lot of sites,educated video ,and other things that can help you with learning languages.

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    • It is common knowledge that learning foreign takes a lot of time end money.Some people are convinced that it is useless and you only you only waste your time and money.
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    • First of all , it is very great ,when you arrive to ather country you can explane something what you need on theirs native language and understend them.Secondly, if you know at least one foreign language you have already more opportunities to get more prestigious and highly paid job.
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    • There is a simple reason for this,they think that if at school they was learning one language about 10 years and have not a good resalts, it is all useless and for good learning foreign languages a peson should have a spetial opportunities.
      투표하세요!
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    • Personally,I strongly object to this statement .Firstly, you need not in the talent as well as you think,more important here to have any occupation discipline.Secondly,if you do not want to pay money for tuters and books you could try to learn it online for free.There are a lot of sites,educated video ,and other things that can help you with learning languages.
      투표하세요!
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