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My Birthday
In my birthday , my family maked surprise for me .
They went to house's uncle and they puted up decorations and maked a cake .
They asked my friends to comeing to my birthday .
This is lovely surprise because there were gifts , I like that .
I'm so happy , thank you so much my family .

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- My Birthday
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- In my birthday , my family maked surprise for me .
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- They went to house's uncle and they puted up decorations and maked a cake .
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- They asked my friends to comeing to my birthday .
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- This is lovely surprise because there were gifts , I like that .
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I'm so happy , thank you so much my family .
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5