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There are people who have money and people who are rich.
This quote makes us realize that not all the money in the world makes us rich person .
A rich person is rich because of their knowledge and their values and respect you have for people and if you have lots of friends and have a person who cares about you should feel lucky .
If you have the chance to breathe, walk , hear and see you must considerate one rich person.
Money is not everything in life, there are hundreds of things that make your happiness.

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- There are people who have money and people who are rich.
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- This quote makes us realize that not all the money in the world makes us rich person .
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- A rich person is rich because of their knowledge and their values and respect you have for people and if you have lots of friends and have a person who cares about you should feel lucky .
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- If you have the chance to breathe, walk , hear and see you must considerate one rich person.
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- Money is not everything in life, there are hundreds of things that make your happiness.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4