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My day
Today, i spent a boring day !
It was raining and i had very cold, i was taking the bus for going to a exam of health from Lille.
I came back at home at 17 : 15 pm.
I ate with my parents at 7 : 00 pm.
And i slept more time after.

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- My day
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- Today, i spent a boring day !
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- It was raining and i had very cold, i was taking the bus for going to a exam of health from Lille.
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- I came back at home at 17 : 15 pm.
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- I ate with my parents at 7 : 00 pm.
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- And i slept more time after.
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