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Văn bản từ dramirezag - English

  • Why Do I love the blue color?

  • It all started when I was a child, I used to see the sky, and what I saw was a lot of beautiful birds, they sang beautifully, and they looked very happy.
  • I thought that they symbolized the freedom and that you could achieve anything you want.
  • Some years later my father said would you like to go to the beach?
  • We said yes, I have never seen the sea.
  • Then we went to San Andres Islands In Colombia, this sea is very awesome, it has many different colors, that's why it's known as the sea of seven colors, I enjoyed so much the sea.
  • 4 years later I was in my bedroom when a beautiful Australian bird comes to my house, It was blue, and It was the most wonderful bird that I've ever known, I loved It so much, He lived in my house for approximately 4 years, we bought a female Australian bird and they gave birth a lot of beautiful birds of different colors.
  • However He the Firts was the favorite, he was a special bird, It sounds crazy but he looked as a little person, he was very smart.
  • One day we found him dead on my yard and the other birds was around him trying to lift him, It was so sad, but i remember him, when a saw a bird or when I look to the sky, or when I see something blue.

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  • câu 1
    • It all started when I was a child, I used to see the sky, and what I saw was a lot of beautiful birds, they sang beautifully, and they looked very happy.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 5
    • Then we went to San Andres Islands In Colombia, this sea is very awesome, it has many different colors, that's why it's known as the sea of seven colors, I enjoyed so much the sea.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • 4 years later I was in my bedroom when a beautiful Australian bird comes to my house, It was blue, and It was the most wonderful bird that I've ever known, I loved It so much, He lived in my house for approximately 4 years, we bought a female Australian bird and they gave birth a lot of beautiful birds of different colors.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • However He the Firts was the favorite, he was a special bird, It sounds crazy but he looked as a little person, he was very smart.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • One day we found him dead on my yard and the other birds was around him trying to lift him, It was so sad, but i remember him, when a saw a bird or when I look to the sky, or when I see something blue.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8