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a strap made from a coat of an orange
I got a strap of the bird made from a fake coat of an orange as a souvenior from my friend.
he came back from home.
(I did got a strap as a souvenior from my friend who came back from home!
It made from a fake coat of an orange!) ↑whicth is better?
right:The art of bird made from coat of real orange.
left:The strap I got from my friend.

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- I got a strap of the bird made from a fake coat of an orange as a souvenior from my friend.
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- he came back from home.
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- (I did got a strap as a souvenior from my friend who came back from home!
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- It made from a fake coat of an orange!) ↑whicth is better?
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- right:The art of bird made from coat of real orange.
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- left:The strap I got from my friend.
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