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I'm going to speak about the notion of progress.

In my opinion, the progress is an improvment, a change and advance science which contributs to making the world better place.

An equivalent could be development.

Progress evolves with time.

My problematics is « To what extent is progress a good evolution ?

» First, let me speak about the good side of progress.

I would like to start by saying the social network is advantages that progress: The social network permits people to talk with persons who are at the other end of the world (For example, thanks to Mail and Facebook).

This is a advance technology important because it is a revolution in the social domaine.

Moroever, progress allows people to increase the trade in the worldwide thanks to globalization in the net.

Besides, The medecine has do a big evolution.

The medicine progress permit to increase the life expectancy.

In 1990, the life expectancy was sixty five years old while in 2013, she was seventy years old in the world.

And, the medecine enables medecin to transfer organs of healthy patient to a sick patient.

It was revolution in the world because this methode permit to safe of life.

For exemple, the creation of “rabbies shot” by Pasteur.

There have been many medical advances, as for instance in Suisse, a blind person since 15 years old has succeeded in regain their sight thanks to bionic eye.

Progress enables an evolution on a par with novel technology.

In the past, the television was in black and white, he had to wait to one october nineteen sixty seven for appearance color télévision in France.

What's more, many technology revolutionized the world between 2000 and 2009.

For instance: MSN, a computer (It's the end for the minitel), internet, the website as you tube, smartphone, and likewise, since 2015 there is explosion of the connected objects as apple watch.

Nevertheless, progress comports drawbacks too despite many evolution.

For exemple, industries are drawbacks of progress because thanks to progress, industries more produce, This means that the pollution increase.

What's more, the increased production cars causes an increase in the air pollution.

It is estimated that there are one millions cars in the world.

For exemple, The social network that pose the question of liberty because the network store data.

Progress could be harmful for man because the creation of engine novel more sophisticated and performant causes unemployment because there is less need for human.

To finish with, increasing of life expectancy causes crisis because it must pay pensions.

In conclude, Progress is a good evolution for evolution with drawbacks more and less important.

That is to say, it is important ther is progress, We have to do warning in the future of the world not to destroy it, as such pollution