Dear Sir/Madam
I’m writing with regard to the 14th annual Callington Music festival, which I attended for the third time.
I would like to congratulate you on a successful organization of this event.
It’s a particularly good idea.
Atmosphere was friendly, food and beverages were taste and cheap, toilet and washing facilities were clean.
Vivid modern decorations created holiday’s mood.
The price was suitable for a thoroughly high level of the organization like you had.
However I have two suggestions regarding next year’s festival.
First of all, every guest wishes that a field would be wider as there was a bit narrowly.
Secondly, only one rapper was at the festival, although there were a lot of raps’ admirers, even I am not an exception.
So, that is all.
I reckon that my offers are not unjustified.
I do hope you take my suggestions into account when organizing next year’s event.
Yours faithfully,
Tania