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  • alternative essay on pollution

  • In the last years, environment’s pollution had increased.
  • The pollution is generally caused by our life’s condition because we don’t respect the nature.
  • In my opinion it is linked to trasports and reavers and seas’s pollution.
  • Almost all the peolple of the world have a car and we use it in our everiday situation.
  • Some television programmes, especially TV news, calculate thet we use our car five times a day.
  • It is certainly a good invention but we don’t use it for all.
  • In fact, the car are more pollutants.
  • Another important problem is the rivers and seas’s pollution.
  • A lot of people, to avoid to spend money, pour polluting substaces in the sea or in the river.
  • In my opinion the nature isn’t respected.
  • I believe that, to improve the environment, we could avoid to use car for small paths and denounce rivers’s pollution.

ΠΑΡΑΚΑΛΟΥΜΕ, ΒΟΗΘΗΣΤΕ ΝΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΟΥΜΕ ΚΑΘΕ ΠΡΟΤΑΣΗ! - English