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Hey guys.
I want to improve my English because I'm going to visit France next month and my French is worse than my English.
And I think it's always good to improve my English.
I'm studying social work and there are a lot of jobs in institutions for refugees.
And not all of them can understand German.
So maybe English or my hands and feet can help me :D I don't know what to write...
I hope I am not so bad in English and I want to thank all of you, who correct my stupid little text :D

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문장 1
- Hey guys.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I want to improve my English because I'm going to visit France next month and my French is worse than my English.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- And I think it's always good to improve my English.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- I'm studying social work and there are a lot of jobs in institutions for refugees.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- And not all of them can understand German.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- So maybe English or my hands and feet can help me :D I don't know what to write...
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- I hope I am not so bad in English and I want to thank all of you, who correct my stupid little text :D
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7