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  • Attitude towards computers

  • Some parents think that their children will spend their time on social networking sites and games instead of studies if there is a computer at home.
  • Perhaps, you expect me to tell my point of view on this problem.
  • In fact, many parents disapprove of home computer.
  • In their word computer stop children from studying.
  • I cannot disagree with this statement.
  • I know from my experience that computers take up a lot of chilren's time.
  • If there would not be, computers children read the books.
  • They would not have to put off reading.
  • They would succeeded in something in real life.
  • Finally, they would know how to talk with an angry perso,n how to make anybody easy on a point, how it feels going sky diving.
  • Maybe you cannot argue about these stuff.
  • But today Internet provides many opportunities.
  • I admit that nowadays you can prepare for the final exams without leaving your house.Internet resources are sure to help you out anyway.
  • You won't need to have paid for your tuition.
  • Getting education will become easy and cheap for you.
  • That cannot be denied.
  • But of course it depends on a user.
  • If he knows disandvantages and advantages of the Internet, the global net won't did any harm to him.
  • If he can work up to the collar , he'll streamline his life.
  • In conclusion I would say that problem of using Internet by children is crucial in our time.
  • I want to address myself to all parents:don't be regardless of the future.
  • You must teach your children to use the Internet in the proper way.

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