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Introduction
At the beginning of 2016 I decided to improve myself, to make my life better and completely change it.
I chose different challenges for me: I created 'must read' list, which consists of 50 books I must to read; I start to have yoga lessons, to go swimming.
I try to change my life by learning more about culture, traditions and languages of different countries.
Don't be afraid of doing something new in your life, because you have all opportunities to make it better.

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- Introduction
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문장 1
- At the beginning of 2016 I decided to improve myself, to make my life better and completely change it.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I chose different challenges for me: I created 'must read' list, which consists of 50 books I must to read; I start to have yoga lessons, to go swimming.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- I try to change my life by learning more about culture, traditions and languages of different countries.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- Don't be afraid of doing something new in your life, because you have all opportunities to make it better.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4