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Do you know ,whan you just have a feeling deep inside that you have made a terrible mistake.Well,that day ,it happend with my friend Alice when she went to home from the party.It was late and dark.Public transport has not worked as a taxi had no money.And she decided to go home on footthe short path.Because she didn`t want to hang around for a long time through the dark streets.

It was her mistake.

Over time ,Alice noticed that someone was pursuesing her.

She felt that herheart was in her mouth.When she went quickly and with a lot of noise.The crackled under her feet as she walked .

Suddanly, man grabbed her, but she managed to escape.Terrified,Alice run awey as fast as she could.

After she notised that she able to break away from the pursuer she realized that she had lost.she felt the cold and her heart was thumping wildly.it seemed to her that she wandered around totally unfamiliar terrain for ages.Over time ,she found the right way to home.

After an exhousting few hours she finally got home, safe and sound at last.In the end ,she thought happily "I`m glad that`s over".what are miraculous escape!