Korekty

Text from netomarcus - English

  • Frozen food

  • We live in the age of the fast food.
  • Nobody needs to spend a lot of time cooking their one food, unless they enjoy it.
  • Any market offers many options of food that you can consume without a big effort to prepare.
  • The offer of frozen food has increased in the last few years and now it's possible to buy a simple mozzarella pizza or fancy French dish in the supermarket closest to your house.
  • However, a diet based only in frozen food and pre-made dishes can lead to serious health issues, like obesity, high pressure or heart diseases.
  • Frozen food is made with the intention of being practical instead of be healthy.
  • Moreover, the manufacturers also put tons of preservatives in the food in order to it lasts longer but these chemical products are not beneficial for humans.
  • Each person have to figure out a way to balance his time needs and his health concerns.
  • Pre-made food is a good option when you are completely occupied to prepare your own food and cannot afford to eat at a restaurant.
  • Eat healthy and keep a routine of exercises are essentials points to reach a good quality of life.
  • I the case of impossibility of eat fresh food, people should, at least, take a multivitamin to guaranteed that they are ingesting all necessary nutrients for keep the well-functioning of the body.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

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    • The offer of frozen food has increased in the last few years and now it's possible to buy a simple mozzarella pizza or fancy French dish in the supermarket closest to your house.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4
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    • However, a diet based only in frozen food and pre-made dishes can lead to serious health issues, like obesity, high pressure or heart diseases.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
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    • Moreover, the manufacturers also put tons of preservatives in the food in order to it lasts longer but these chemical products are not beneficial for humans.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7
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    • Pre-made food is a good option when you are completely occupied to prepare your own food and cannot afford to eat at a restaurant.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9
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    • I the case of impossibility of eat fresh food, people should, at least, take a multivitamin to guaranteed that they are ingesting all necessary nutrients for keep the well-functioning of the body.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11