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A hard day.
Today,i had a hard day.i woke up about 9 am and i took a shower.There, i washed my hair and body.then,i had dressed clean clothes and put underwear in wash.After i have eaten and went to the market and bought all the necessary thigs for me.it was a food,clean socks and a bottle of wine,which grew up and ripened on the sunny slopes...Yummy.After,as usually, day was over.

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- A hard day.
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- Today,i had a hard day.i woke up about 9 am and i took a shower.There, i washed my hair and body.then,i had dressed clean clothes and put underwear in wash.After i have eaten and went to the market and bought all the necessary thigs for me.it was a food,clean socks and a bottle of wine,which grew up and ripened on the sunny slopes...Yummy.After,as usually, day was over.
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- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 1