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It's all about me
Hi... let me introduce myself, my name is tazmania, I am a housewive with a cute boy.
Now he still 16 months old, and I want to teach him english. to make a better teaching, I must learn english first step before him.
I ever learn english in one of the most english course in jakarta.
But it was a long time ago, and i'm forget.
My grammar is bad, sometimes i know what does it means but i'm still confused.
I love my child, he is a cute boy, and i think because now he is teaching and learning about letters.

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문장 1
- Hi... let me introduce myself, my name is tazmania, I am a housewive with a cute boy.
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문장 2
- Now he still 16 months old, and I want to teach him english. to make a better teaching, I must learn english first step before him.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
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- I ever learn english in one of the most english course in jakarta.
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문장 4
- But it was a long time ago, and i'm forget.
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문장 5
- My grammar is bad, sometimes i know what does it means but i'm still confused.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- I love my child, he is a cute boy, and i think because now he is teaching and learning about letters.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6