添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

ello69からのテキスト - English

  • Morning

  • This morning I woke up early, so I had a huge and tasty breakfast with homemade orange juice, pancakes, coffee and bakery.
  • (Patisserie) Then, I took my shower and I gone at work.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English