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Text from Linhdang - English

Do you want to learn Vietnamese?
Hello everyone, my name is Linh.
I'm Vietnamese and i'm waitress, working in district 1.
I like taking with foreigner, in English and Vietnamese too ^^ I'm happy if you r interested in my language :) let's be friends ~

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Sentence 1
- Hello everyone, my name is Linh.
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- เพิ่มการแก้ไขใหม่ - Sentence 1
Sentence 2
- I'm Vietnamese and i'm waitress, working in district 1.
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- เพิ่มการแก้ไขใหม่ - Sentence 2
Sentence 3
- I like taking with foreigner, in English and Vietnamese too ^^ I'm happy if you r interested in my language :) let's be friends ~
  Vote now!
- เพิ่มการแก้ไขใหม่ - Sentence 3