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Text from Ardeney - English

  • The formal letter

  • Dear Mr ABC, I am writing to congratulate you on the brilliant organisation of our school’s 50th anniversary.
  • I am an old student of William Shakespeare Secondary School.
  • I graduated several years ago and it was a huge pleasure to visit this place after all this time.
  • The event was perfectly organised, I was really impressed with the celebration.
  • All the teachers’ and graduates’ speeches were deeply moving and they brought back a lot of memories.
  • Furthermore, it was good to see that you care about the school and it is decorated and well-maintained.
  • I believe it is important to organise events like that.
  • The school is not just a building, the most important thing in being a student is meeting new people and making friends.
  • The anniversary is a perfect opportunity to bring people back together, meet old friends and get back in touch again.
  • I particularly enjoyed seeing my old classmates during the event.
  • Another benefit is that the old students who return to school are often prosperous people.
  • They had graduated from the best universities and ran their own businesses.
  • They came back to the lower secondary school for the anniversary and now they want to support it with their money.
  • It will help you with making the school even better.
  • To sum up, it was an excellent idea to celebrate the anniversary in such a splendid way.
  • Thank you very much for your work.
  • Yours sincerely, XYZ (It is made up ;) )

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