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  • Good Parenting

  • Everyone can have a children but being parents is totally different meaning.
  • In today's world, people ignore themselves they are really busy about their social media accounts, especially parents don't spend time with their childrens, so I choose to this topic to define a good parent with my thoughts.
  • Firstly, a good parent should create time with their children.
  • Because if children don't have enough love it will affect their all behaviors.
  • I believe that every psychological problem including lovenessless behind so, love is the key.
  • Then, parents should show exemplary behaviors.
  • For example if they worn about smoking to their children they shouldn't smoke too.
  • When childrens are growing they choose a role model like mother and father so, they should be carefull about their attitues.
  • I believe that our generation will be good parents because we are more aware of what is right.
  • In according to this, well trained childrens helps to increase happiness of world.

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