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  • the meditation, image of the future medicine?

  • Ode to reflection, self searching, synonym of Buddha … Generally, these are the first thoughts which come to mind when we are talking about meditation.
  • This relaxation method became famous in the last decade due to the trends set by celebrities.
  • The benefits of mindfulness meditation have always been promoted by their addicts.
  • However, the last researches on this subject demonstrated a reduce of stress and risk for various diseases.
  • In a recent article published in the Biological Psychiatry, scientists explained that meditation could change our brain and body, including a potential improvement in our health.
  • In addition to be used to induce calm and physical relaxation, this could became a treatment developed by several hospitals.
  • However, this is “still in its very early stages” according to Richard J.
  • Davidson, a neuroscientist.
  • Several studies have suggested meditation may help reduce blood pressure, cancer, respiratory illnesses (flu) and some common menopausal symptoms like hot flashes.
  • The researchers report that those who meditated for about 30 minutes a day for eight weeks had measurable changes in gray-matter density in parts of the brain associated with memory, sense of self, empathy and stress.
  • To this point of view, we can easily understand why so many researchers and doctors are so enthusiastic with the idea of developing this method.
  • The interest is not shared by everyone.
  • The classic medicine is still reluctant to these methods “of another time”.
  • It is however, interesting to see that a thousand-year medicine takes precedence over the classic medicine.
  • There is still a lot we can learn from old books, theories and lifestyle ...

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    • Ode to reflection, self searching, synonym of Buddha … Generally, these are the first thoughts which come to mind when we are talking about meditation.
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    • In a recent article published in the Biological Psychiatry, scientists explained that meditation could change our brain and body, including a potential improvement in our health.
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    • In addition to be used to induce calm and physical relaxation, this could became a treatment developed by several hospitals.
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    • Several studies have suggested meditation may help reduce blood pressure, cancer, respiratory illnesses (flu) and some common menopausal symptoms like hot flashes.
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    • The researchers report that those who meditated for about 30 minutes a day for eight weeks had measurable changes in gray-matter density in parts of the brain associated with memory, sense of self, empathy and stress.
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    • To this point of view, we can easily understand why so many researchers and doctors are so enthusiastic with the idea of developing this method.
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