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Text from ajulyav - English

  • Compare yourself today and yourself five years ago.

  • It is known that everything changes in our world.
  • This is one of important characteristics of our life.
  • If I were asked how I had changed for these five years, I could reply that there were several ways in which I was different, because a lot of things had also changed.
  • If to compare myself today and five years ago, I can say that I am more open to people than used to be.
  • If a few years ago it was really hard to ask any question to strangers, because I was very shy.
  • One of my problems at that time was speeches in public.
  • I was so nervous about every speech; I could not fall asleep the night before the day I had to speak in public.
  • Today I can start a conversation easily and do not feel any inconvenience.
  • Also as I tried to make my public appearances more often, my fear is gone.
  • There is another thing that is different.
  • Now if I did something wrong, I can admit my mistake, say sorry for my actions and to ask what I should do to redress this error.
  • Thus, this helps me to avoid a lot of conflicting situations with my friends, family and at my university.
  • Also I started to admit mistakes for me and that is very important in order to achieve good results in studying or self-development.
  • For example, I said to myself that I did not know English, and I could learn this language long ago, if I was not too lazy.
  • That is why I decided to register for the English course.
  • But when I was at school I did not own my faults and defer to others’ opinion.
  • So I quarrel with my relatives very often, though I knew that I was mistaken.
  • From this, if to compare myself today and five years ago I can summarize that I have changed myself for the better, so I am more open to people and also I can admit my mistakes.

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