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Κείμενο από vaness182 - English

February 18th.
Once upon a time a car in the park eating ice-cream, but it doesn't go to run because the weather was very hot.
He likes run in the afternoon and see turn on the lights the city.
He can fly like the birds because the has wings.
His girlfriend cheated him, and he decided to travel around the world and know new cars and have more friends.
One day met a Porsche and he invited her to go around the roller coaster, After the car traveled to Colombia, and he met a Chiva.
Achievement know many places in this country and he needs a rest day in the garage, with alcohol on the mirror, he opened the hood of the car and was there a woman dead.

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- February 18th.
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- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Τίτλος
Πρόταση 1
- Once upon a time a car in the park eating ice-cream, but it doesn't go to run because the weather was very hot.
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 1
Πρόταση 2
- He likes run in the afternoon and see turn on the lights the city.
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 2
Πρόταση 3
- He can fly like the birds because the has wings.
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 3
Πρόταση 4
- His girlfriend cheated him, and he decided to travel around the world and know new cars and have more friends.
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 4
Πρόταση 5
- One day met a Porsche and he invited her to go around the roller coaster, After the car traveled to Colombia, and he met a Chiva.
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 5
Πρόταση 6
- Achievement know many places in this country and he needs a rest day in the garage, with alcohol on the mirror, he opened the hood of the car and was there a woman dead.
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 6