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  • Internet VS teenagers

  • Why today’s teenagers use the Internet so much?
  • I think it's because teens can find there all they want:computer games, social networking sites, and what not.
  • Parents should remember that most teenagers are keen on the Internet not studies.
  • In their view, lessons and homework are a utter bore.
  • How the Internet makes long-distance communication easier?
  • It's a well-known fact that the global net empowers people to communicate with all world.
  • Due to high speed Internet and more update gadgets long-distance communication becomes the simplest way to talk with a person wherever he is.
  • What dangers teenagers can face when they use the Internet?
  • Naturally younger generation can be endangered while surfing the net.
  • For instance computer games often get teens into trouble.
  • They forget about real life and get mad about entertainments they enjoy in the Internet.
  • Another problem teenagers can face noowadays is social networking sites.They sometimes absorb the young.
  • Teens are hooked on"likes" and "dislikes".
  • As a result the young don't notice what happens in real life-the same trouble as computer games.
  • Please take notice of my punctuation!

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