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Text from vaness182 - English

  • february 20th. second

  • Today is Saturday, I don't like the hot weather, in this season in colombia the weather is very hot, now I don't like put my feet on the floor because the apartment has carpet over floor. and I feel hot my feet if I put over floor.
  • I don't know what thing, when my brother had the accident, his cell phone don't got broken, but the Monday night I have pushed on the alarm an when I was putting on the bedside table the cell phone fall in down and got broken the screen, after I started to cry.
  • I like say in french "mirror" or "etoile", I like talk in frenchs because when I see myself on the mirror talking I see myself doing gestures with my mouth.
  • Since I have broken the vase on the table of the dining room my mon no bring flowers at home, in the next holidays I will bring flowers to my mom.
  • My brother scolded me I get angry because I have everythings out of side of position, the clothes, the books until the underwear, I'm study math and since I started to study just focus in the study, after I do the others things.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Sentence 1
    • Today is Saturday, I don't like the hot weather, in this season in colombia the weather is very hot, now I don't like put my feet on the floor because the apartment has carpet over floor. and I feel hot my feet if I put over floor.
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  • Sentence 2
    • I don't know what thing, when my brother had the accident, his cell phone don't got broken, but the Monday night I have pushed on the alarm an when I was putting on the bedside table the cell phone fall in down and got broken the screen, after I started to cry.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 2
  • Sentence 3
    • I like say in french "mirror" or "etoile", I like talk in frenchs because when I see myself on the mirror talking I see myself doing gestures with my mouth.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 3
  • Sentence 4
    • Since I have broken the vase on the table of the dining room my mon no bring flowers at home, in the next holidays I will bring flowers to my mom.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4
  • Sentence 5
    • My brother scolded me I get angry because I have everythings out of side of position, the clothes, the books until the underwear, I'm study math and since I started to study just focus in the study, after I do the others things.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5