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sun is back in town
Today I woke up at 10 in the morning, there was a beautiful sun with a perfect blue sky.
So with my mum we've decide to go out in central for having a lunch.
We went in a beautiful Italian restaurant we ate pasta with bolognaise and a glass of wine.
Then we decided to go in Rhone's banks for walking and enjoying sun.

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- sun is back in town
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- Today I woke up at 10 in the morning, there was a beautiful sun with a perfect blue sky.
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- So with my mum we've decide to go out in central for having a lunch.
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- We went in a beautiful Italian restaurant we ate pasta with bolognaise and a glass of wine.
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- Then we decided to go in Rhone's banks for walking and enjoying sun.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4