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  • An informal email about giving information about summer holiday

  • Dear Maria: How are you?
  • I hope you’ve passed the test you have told me the time before we speak.
  • In your email you also said me that you have thinking about spending a few days in the coast of cadiz next summer.
  • What a great idea!
  • I can give you some information.
  • Fist of all, although it is a bit far to the coast ( about 100 kilometers), you must visit Sevilla.
  • The view of the Guadalquivir river from the Triana’s bridge is amazing.
  • I can go with you and show the city, as I have lived there for five years.
  • Furthermore, you have to visit these beaches: Bolonia, La Barrosa, Punta paloma.All of them have white sand and the water is the cleanest of the surroundings.
  • You can also visit Tarifa, where is the castle of Guzmán el Bueno.
  • At this town, you can eat local fried fish and other traditional meals.
  • If you have enough time, you would go to the “ Coto de Doñana”, crossing the Guadalquiver river.
  • It is one of the most important wetlands of Europe! Write me soon!
  • And tell me if you want to visit another places! Kisses;

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