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Κείμενο από Kasahara - English

  • Are we too dependents on mobile phones?

  • In the last twenty years many things have changed.
  • There were a lot of them: children’s safety in cars, the domestic appliances in the kitchen, as a ceramic hobs, video games.
  • But in my opinion the most important change is mobile phones.
  • Early in the 90’S when mobile phones appeared, they became very popular in a short period of time.
  • Their advantages seems a little “ magical”.
  • To this moment if you wanted or needed to speak with someone, and you were in the street, you had to find a telephone box.
  • Well, there is nothing compared with the resources that mobile phones have nowadays.
  • They help us with work and leisure.
  • But in the other hand, their use have been increased until the point that we cannot live without them.
  • For the majority of people, taking the phone is the first thing they make when getting up of bed.
  • This fact seems to me a little oppressive.
  • To sum up, I think we are too obsessed with mobiles phones but is hard to disconnect.

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