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family
My family has 11 members.we live in the same house.
My dad is sick nowadays.
I feel sad for him.I can't live without my parents.
One of my family has a crazy mind.He never mind about the others.
He thinks about himself only .
The life with him is too difficult .Oh my mam how can be a good day without you.

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- My family has 11 members.we live in the same house.
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- My dad is sick nowadays.
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- I feel sad for him.I can't live without my parents.
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- One of my family has a crazy mind.He never mind about the others.
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- He thinks about himself only .
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- The life with him is too difficult .Oh my mam how can be a good day without you.
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