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  • Earthquake

  • Earthquake is defined as a movement of tectonic plates under countries which creates waves in the surface.
  • The earthquakes are more often in some areas than others in the world like India, Japan or south of America.
  • Nowadays, we know how earthquakes work and we can predict when an earthquake is going to happen and make resistant or durable building.
  • Relating to movement of tectonic plates is eruption of volcanoes or volcanism.
  • This phenomenon causes large number of dead mainly in sub developed countries which doesn’t have enough technology and resources to prevent damage.
  • Then when these events happen its normal that others countries help them proving food and clothes and also money through organizations which work and help them.
  • By last point, living in these areas where earthquakes are common can be at least stressful but beyond of it.
  • Every natural phenomenon is dangerous and unsafe till human being discovers way of control the natural power of Mother Nature.

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    • Nowadays, we know how earthquakes work and we can predict when an earthquake is going to happen and make resistant or durable building.
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    • This phenomenon causes large number of dead mainly in sub developed countries which doesn’t have enough technology and resources to prevent damage.
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    • Then when these events happen its normal that others countries help them proving food and clothes and also money through organizations which work and help them.
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    • Every natural phenomenon is dangerous and unsafe till human being discovers way of control the natural power of Mother Nature.
      투표하세요!
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