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Мәтін алынған ... - English

  • History

  • Once upon a time, in an abandoned city he lived a small family, which formed the dad, who always worked in what he could for his family did not lack anything to eat, the mother, who protected his family and his treasure most precious because it meant everything to her and of course, the children, a boy and a girl.
  • Among them the youngest daughter was a very shy girl who did not like talking, many of the people who came to know thought it was dumb, whereas the child was a little more outgoing.
  • One day the police came to the house in the abandoned city where this small family lived, they told the father that he had to get yourself a good job and a better place to live, but they were going to take away their children.
  • The desperate father left the city abandoned and began to look for a job every day, while the mother was responsible for caring for their children since they were very small and could not take care of themselves.
  • Over the days the father managed to get a job as a garbage collector, the person who gave him the job could sense the anguish reflected in her eyes, so I asked him why be satisfied with any job and not looking for something that really liked, so dad decided to tell his story, his past and so have been living while he and his family.
  • The good man who listened to her story, while providing the job offered a room where they could stay while he and his family found elsewhere.
  • One day the father in the trash, a lottery ticket, which was the winning ticket, after that day changed their lives and they lived happily ever found.

Әр сөйлемді дұрыстауға көмектесіңізші - English

  • Тақырыбы
  • Сөйлем 1
    • Once upon a time, in an abandoned city he lived a small family, which formed the dad, who always worked in what he could for his family did not lack anything to eat, the mother, who protected his family and his treasure most precious because it meant everything to her and of course, the children, a boy and a girl.
      Қазір дауыс бер!
    • Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 1Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 1
  • Сөйлем 2
    • Among them the youngest daughter was a very shy girl who did not like talking, many of the people who came to know thought it was dumb, whereas the child was a little more outgoing.
      Қазір дауыс бер!
    • Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 2Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 2
  • Сөйлем 3
    • One day the police came to the house in the abandoned city where this small family lived, they told the father that he had to get yourself a good job and a better place to live, but they were going to take away their children.
      Қазір дауыс бер!
    • Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 3Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 3
  • Сөйлем 4
    • The desperate father left the city abandoned and began to look for a job every day, while the mother was responsible for caring for their children since they were very small and could not take care of themselves.
      Қазір дауыс бер!
    • Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 4Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 4
  • Сөйлем 5
    • Over the days the father managed to get a job as a garbage collector, the person who gave him the job could sense the anguish reflected in her eyes, so I asked him why be satisfied with any job and not looking for something that really liked, so dad decided to tell his story, his past and so have been living while he and his family.
      Қазір дауыс бер!
    • Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 5Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 5
  • Сөйлем 6
  • Сөйлем 7