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My english
For me english is the most beautiful language in the world, so il want really to improve my english.
For that i try everyday to translate at least 8 sentences .
Really now i see that my english is not so bas so try to do the same my freinds and you Will sée the difference.

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- My english
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- For me english is the most beautiful language in the world, so il want really to improve my english.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
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- For that i try everyday to translate at least 8 sentences .
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- Really now i see that my english is not so bas so try to do the same my freinds and you Will sée the difference.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3