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  • My dream

  • My dream is become a lawyer Because i love equality and i always can't help if see someone has suffering or discriminate with other people about sex, job, poor or rich, beautiful or ugly,....
  • However, in my country, my city. also at my home, everybody doesn't respect for this job.
  • They don't understand about it.
  • My parent, my cousins prevent me from it.
  • They want me to choose other job such as teacher, police, doctor,....
  • Lawyer is paid not much, with a small money i can't live and support for my parent.
  • I'm very very confusion, anxiety....
  • I want to carry out my dream very much, but life don't allow me to do .............
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