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Write a story about a person whose company you like and who influences you well(I doubt about this phrase) There is such a person in the world.
Apparently my mother is the very person.
She can give me any advice and support me during difficult times.
She always surrounds me(As I see,"surround" does not fit here).
I think when I talk to her ,she helps me to get kinder and politer.

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- Write a story about a person whose company you like and who influences you well(I doubt about this phrase) There is such a person in the world.
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- Apparently my mother is the very person.
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- She can give me any advice and support me during difficult times.
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- She always surrounds me(As I see,"surround" does not fit here).
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- I think when I talk to her ,she helps me to get kinder and politer.
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