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Improve my english!
Hello everyone!
My name is Stefano, I'm 28, and I would like to improve my english because I want to do a master or an MBA in an english country.
I think my listening and my reading abilities are quite good, but my writing is a bit poor.. that's why I need your help to improve!
I think I'll start to write a little text like this one one a week.
With the help of you, my polyglot friends, I would succeed in my aim. Thank you. Best regards! Stefano

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- Improve my english!
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- Hello everyone!
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- My name is Stefano, I'm 28, and I would like to improve my english because I want to do a master or an MBA in an english country.
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Sentence 3
- I think my listening and my reading abilities are quite good, but my writing is a bit poor.. that's why I need your help to improve!
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- I think I'll start to write a little text like this one one a week.
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- With the help of you, my polyglot friends, I would succeed in my aim. Thank you. Best regards! Stefano
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