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  • My name is Romane, Im 16 years old, I live in my parent's house yet, in France next to the WW1's beaches, I want to be orthodontist, I need to 10 years of study to do this job.
  • But i have a dream, since i was very young, it's to live in Iceland, just for one or two years, so i need to speak english very well, because i'll travelled alone.
  • My english isn't perfect, but during my last trip in Iceland, it was very good, i understood everything, i was scared about the language, but 1 or 2 years of training will be good, to realised my dream.

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  • Kalimat 1
    • My name is Romane, Im 16 years old, I live in my parent's house yet, in France next to the WW1's beaches, I want to be orthodontist, I need to 10 years of study to do this job.
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    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 1TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 1
  • Kalimat 2
    • But i have a dream, since i was very young, it's to live in Iceland, just for one or two years, so i need to speak english very well, because i'll travelled alone.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2
  • Kalimat 3
    • My english isn't perfect, but during my last trip in Iceland, it was very good, i understood everything, i was scared about the language, but 1 or 2 years of training will be good, to realised my dream.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3