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About me
My name is Hoa, Im 23 years old, Im from Vietnam.
I have a feare with English a long time.
But now, i want contend with it.
How can I brave?
Can you help me, please. Thanks at all.

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- About me
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- My name is Hoa, Im 23 years old, Im from Vietnam.
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句子 2
- I have a feare with English a long time.
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句子 3
- But now, i want contend with it.
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- How can I brave?
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句子 5
- Can you help me, please. Thanks at all.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5