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Text from Matodo - English

Title
- Learn Language
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Sentence 1
- Hey, I'm 17 years old and I would like to learn english in this portal.
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Sentence 2
- My English is manifest not so good, therefore i will be learn english.
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Sentence 3
- Besides i speak still two other language that is croatian and german.
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Sentence 4
- Can someone help me my english to improve ? :)
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