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The rest of the my Day)
Now, when I learned a few simple things, I want to try to tell about my day something else.
After the Dara O'Briain show, I watched the video about Russian (maybe Ukrainian) girl, who went to Japan.
She talks about Japanese customs and traditions, and it's interesting to listen) Also I tried to prepare toast for lunch.
Toast burnied and became black, but I ate It anyway.
Now I want to cook pasta, It is difficult to burn.
So I'd like to thank everyone who helps with corrections. Thank you.

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- Now, when I learned a few simple things, I want to try to tell about my day something else.
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- After the Dara O'Briain show, I watched the video about Russian (maybe Ukrainian) girl, who went to Japan.
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- She talks about Japanese customs and traditions, and it's interesting to listen) Also I tried to prepare toast for lunch.
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- Toast burnied and became black, but I ate It anyway.
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- Now I want to cook pasta, It is difficult to burn.
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