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Inhabitant of the Earth
Hello everyone, this is Daniel.
First of all, I am a Spanish man and I would like a lot upgrading my English.
Actually I am studying an English Cambridge course in order to take the B1 Certificate.
I have look for a website since the beginning of my course.
Therefore I wish write more in English because sometimes I have no words to express my thoughts and obviously I need more vocabulary and fluency.
Finally I just hope to improve your Spanish and you could help me with my English. Cheers :D

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- First of all, I am a Spanish man and I would like a lot upgrading my English.
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- Actually I am studying an English Cambridge course in order to take the B1 Certificate.
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- Therefore I wish write more in English because sometimes I have no words to express my thoughts and obviously I need more vocabulary and fluency.
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- Finally I just hope to improve your Spanish and you could help me with my English. Cheers :D
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