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a little story about me.
I really didn't where not traveled.
The country and city I have visited this is due to my work.
I got a lot of impressions from the visit to Venezuela and Mexico.
Most of all I liked the people.
When they knew that I from Russia, they were very hospitable and responsive.
The most interesting places I have visited this Aquarium in the Vera Cruz and Kachamay Park in Venezuela.
By the way in Venezuela, I got acquainted with wonderful people who became my friends. I finished

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- I really didn't where not traveled.
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- The country and city I have visited this is due to my work.
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- I got a lot of impressions from the visit to Venezuela and Mexico.
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- Most of all I liked the people.
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- When they knew that I from Russia, they were very hospitable and responsive.
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- The most interesting places I have visited this Aquarium in the Vera Cruz and Kachamay Park in Venezuela.
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- By the way in Venezuela, I got acquainted with wonderful people who became my friends. I finished
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