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Text from chuong3009 - English

  • The worst bus ride ever

  • Every Friday night, when I want to go to downtown from suburb, I take the bus with one friend instead of driving a car.
  • I supposed that sitting in the bus is more relaxing and less stressful but I was wrong.
  • Last Friday night, there was a ton of people in the bus.
  • It was a too crowd for us to find two seats together, so I had to sit next to a complete stranger who had talked constantly for 45 minutes.
  • Although I didn’t want to be rude to him, that time I really need the peace and the relaxation so I revealed some signals to telling him that I wasn’t interested in his stories, but he ignored them all and kept talking.
  • And that wasn’t the worst!
  • There was a guy sitting on the floor next to me who had not showered for days.
  • I thought that I had could smell his B.O. from the distant 10 meters and it’s so disgusting.
  • After that Friday night, I think I would have been better off driving downtown instead of taking the bus!

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English