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  • Teens Vs summer jobs

  • Why do teenagers do summer jobs?
  • Nowadays the younger generation wants to be financially independent of parents.
  • We should not forget that teens are always eager to get new experiences.
  • Doing summer jobs perfectly suit teenagers who wish to earn some money make acquaintances with others and realize what they are good at.
  • Besides it makes teenagers consider their future career.So the main reason why teens aim to work a little in summer is that it broadens their mind.
  • Do any of your brothers/sisters/friends do summer jobs? What are they?
  • I have to admit that only few of my friends tend to work in summer.
  • Most of them think that they should have a rest in this season of year.
  • They splash in rivers ride bikes play footy and don't care about summer jobs.
  • But some of my friends are just crazy about jobs.
  • They read any advert they come across.
  • I must say that all my active and hardworking friends have everything they need.
  • Their parents see them as adults who are responsible for their deeds.
  • Would you like to do summer jobs?
  • I'll never blow this chance because working practice will do me good.
  • It's really useful and interesting.

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